That was awesome. The best parts for me were the sections with the Turks, but that's not to say that the other parts didn't rock; the Turks are my favorite characters and you wrote them SO WELL.
Tseng had encouraged this in them, had developed that vaguely nurturing impulse towards one another, and had used it both to boost morale and protect his people.
None of this would stop him from killing them all if they didn’t stop being so ridiculously overprotective of him.
That ... cracked me up.
Also, much love for some original characters, and for AVALANCHE as well. The scenes with Aeris were really touching. Can't wait to see more updates. ^^
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Date: 2006-04-22 02:42 am (UTC)Tseng had encouraged this in them, had developed that vaguely nurturing impulse towards one another, and had used it both to boost morale and protect his people.
None of this would stop him from killing them all if they didn’t stop being so ridiculously overprotective of him.
That ... cracked me up.
Also, much love for some original characters, and for AVALANCHE as well. The scenes with Aeris were really touching. Can't wait to see more updates. ^^