lanerose

Well, I guess it depends on how they're confusing. The spots where memories are fading in and out are definitely deliberate, though I have tried to make them as clear as possible either by spelling out the situation before the fade in such a way that you know what's happening and / or mentioning after the fact that they were memories / dreams / etc. I'm hoping you didn't mean things are confusing when it slides from one POV to the next ~ I just can't bring myself to label POV shifts b/c I've always felt doing so insults the reader. Does that make any sense? ::shrugs:: If not, let me know what's confusing, and I'll see if I can make it any better! Glad that at least the Cid section works! XD