ext_34738 ([identity profile] aefallen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lanerose 2007-04-24 02:04 am (UTC)

I loved this! *beams* This is the way I wanted the story to end, and I'm always incredibly happy when I read fics about Luke returning because my logical mind keeps telling me it's Asch. But the way you handled this was impressive: the way you worked Jade in and brought up how difficult Luke's situation was. It made me want to read more, and find out what'd happen with Tear. But I'm very happy about the story the way it is.

Sure, I remember everything about Asch, but that’s not who I am
My favourite line in the story. You brought up why it's most likely for Luke to return: simply because a man is more than just the sum of his memories.

Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us!

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